【雅思大作文】开头段这样写，7分稳稳被你拿捏住！

发布时间：2024-01-27 人气：181 作者：雅智留学

俗话说万事开头难，这句话放在雅思大作文里同学们也一定会有共鸣。写作分数上不去的同学们，在大作文的开头往往会犯这几个毛病：啰嗦、跑题、观点不清晰或太过绝对化，还有一个，就是花时间太多！开头段到底该怎么写，才能在节省时间的同时开好写作的头呢？今天就教同学们写，让大家用最短的时间写出最漂亮的开头惊呆考官

改写问题

作为作文的第一句话，一定要让读者知道你所写的话题背景，因此，改写作文题是最有效的方式，同时这也是同学们展示自己英语实力的好机会。举个例子：

题目：

The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually invovle very little risk. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

改写：

The majority of news reports tend to be sensational, shocking and unpleasant.

或

Nowadays, we hear news from all over the world everyday through the mass media, and it is often combined with shocking or frightening images which affect the way we think and behave.

在这里，我们用一些同义替换，比如bad news用sensational, shocking, unpleasant来总结，又比如media, news可以换成mass media，用同义替换、改变句子结构来改写题目，是很有用的，而且也会让你更加明白你需要讨论的是什么，避免跑题哦~

提出观点

雅思大作文十分看重同学们在自己观点这方面的表达，强而有力地展示自己的态度在写作中是非常重要的。而由于大作文题型多样，不同的题型会要求考生有不同的侧重点，现在我们就以题型为分类，逐一学习如何根据不同的题型写出观点句

同意与否

此类型作文如果是问是否同意，最好不要持中立态度；如果问到了程度（extent），可以根据自己对题目的理解用totally／mostly／partly来作答。在这里我们可以用的句型有：

In this essay, I will examine/explore/analyse the view that...
I agree/disagree with this point of view for...reasons.
I totally/mostly/partly agree/disagree with this point of view and I will analyse the issue in the following passage.
Personally, I think this point of view is overly simplistic.
To be personal, I am in high favor of...

比较利弊

这类型作文需要根据题目背景分析利弊中哪一方占的比重更大。在这里我们可以用的句型有：

As far as I am concerned, its advantages outweigh its disavantages.
I personally believe that its disadvantages exceed its advantages for the following reasons.
I am inclined to believe that the benefits override its drawbacks.

双边讨论

这类作文要注意，我们必须两个观点都要讨论，然后给出自己的意见。这里我们可以用的句型有：

Some people claim that..., while many others argue that.... Personally, I am in favor of the former/ latter view.
The debate these days draws our attention about whether...（两方观点改写）. In this essay, I will elaborate two typical opinions concerning this issue.
In recent years, there has been a long-term dispute whether...（两方观点改写）. I will explore these two opinions often heard in this controversy.
Some people are of the opinion that..., whereas others argue that.... For my part, I share the former/ latter point of view.
Some people advocate that..., while others argue that.... Taking into consideration both sides of the issue, I tent to favour the former/ latter view.

报告类型

这类作文需要分析题干中现象产生的原因和影响，考生再在正文里给出相关建议。所以此类题型在开头段只需要改写题目、概括大概的趋势就好，不需要提出自己的观点。这里我们可以用的句型有：